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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 19:58:27 GMT -5
Ya. "Sent into Change" Lol wow I am good. >.< their lives were thrown into Mayhem? Oh, I dont know.
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 20:08:32 GMT -5
Everything- order and peace and prosperity as they knew it- was thrown aside and blown away by the winds of change? I dunno.
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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 20:15:34 GMT -5
winds of change xDDD
Ya thats good.
Do we really need anything else? We can say "Now the Humans and the new creatures of many worlds must learn to cope with eachother, now that the portals are closed." Or something, I dont know.
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 20:18:22 GMT -5
Hm.
Leave out the last part about the portals and its good.
Now how is it, with the revisions?
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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 20:38:27 GMT -5
At the time of the eclipse, when the shadow of the earth fell across the sun, and everything- order and peace and prosperity as the humans knew it- was thrown aside and blown away by the winds of change. Two portals were formed and opened, letting all the creatures of the world of Twilight and the world of _____ to mingle with the humans. Now the Humans and the new creatures of many worlds must learn to cope with eachother. Thats what we've got.
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 20:49:03 GMT -5
At the time of the eclipse, when the shadow of the earth fell across the sun, everything- order and peace and prosperity as the humans knew it- was thrown aside and blown away by the winds of change. Two portals were formed and opened, letting all the creatures of the realm of Twilight and the realm of _____ to mingle with the humans. Now the Humans and the new creatures of many worlds must learn to cope with each other.
Tweaked it a little.
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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 20:51:00 GMT -5
Whoot. Awsome! :3 Kinda stops abruptly though...
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 20:53:20 GMT -5
Hrm...
At the time of the eclipse, when the shadow of the earth fell across the sun, everything- order and peace and prosperity as the humans knew it- was thrown aside and blown away by the winds of change. Two portals were formed and opened, letting all the creatures of the realm of Twilight and the realm of _____ to mingle with the humans; And now, the Humans and the new creatures of many worlds must learn to cope with each other.
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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 20:54:09 GMT -5
Good! :3
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 20:57:23 GMT -5
Thankies. :-3
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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 21:06:22 GMT -5
Shall I put it up?
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 21:08:39 GMT -5
I'll put it up on the side tables. :-3
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 21:10:10 GMT -5
'Tis up. :-3
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Post by Venom on Aug 3, 2008 21:14:17 GMT -5
Ahh thank you! -huggles-
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Post by Ambrosia on Aug 3, 2008 21:23:18 GMT -5
You're welcome. :-3
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